Once was enough.Ok read. Kind of simplistic, not very realistic, and in my opinion, the author was not true to her own narrative.For instance, the lead character Jasmine was described as "shy", but was written as sexually forward and even aggressive. We never say once instance of her being even reticent, let alone shy. Same for one of the male characters, (either Chase or Alex - hard to remember since they were hardly distinguishable from each other) - described as somewhat shy, but not the case. Which brings up another point - Chase and Alex were really hard to distinguish, which made identifying with these characters very difficult. For instance, we were told that Chase was one who liked to think through situations and analyze things, but we say little evidence of that. This book is a case of an author who 'tells' but doesn't 'show'. Another instance: We are told these two male characters are 'bi-sexual' but by their love and sex language, they really felt more 'gay' to me. Not saying that as a derogatory thing, but as another inconsistency. Her writing isn't bad, though her dialogue is a little immature, and the plot pretty shallow. Multiple sex scenes isn't enough to sustain my interest. I am certainly interested in the development of menage relationships - fascinated, actually, but there has to be a plot, dialogue, and character development to sustain my interest. My advice would be that it is a better thing to develop a character by showing the audience their personality traits through their dialogue and actions rather than trying to tell us who they are. Ultimately, 'telling' doesn't work, unless your 'showing' is extremely consistent to the 'telling'.I wish this author luck, but this book goes into my 'once is enough' file. I was pleasantly surprised by this book; I confess that I read it in one sitting. I loved Chase and Alex, and of course, Jasmine! They fit together well in the steamy scenes that were in the book (several, I might add). It was nice, though. It wasn't all about the sex. The plot was plausible and kept you interested. I really wish the author would write a second book to let us know how things are progressing with the triad.
Do You like book Coming Full Circle (2009)?
I thought that this was good it didn't have a lot of feeling it was short but overall good
—kakashi
Sweet little book. Two guys, one girl. All were best friends in high school.
—Bob
Decent enough book, but not something that will stick with me.
—Bink
Another hot book. Will we hear more from them?
—layla1997
